Tuesday, December 7, 2010

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Was listening to taylor swift's new album and started scribbling this....this...thing. Edited it slightly, but it still doesn't sound right.

Just dumping it here to see whether you can do something about it, o great whoever-who-gets-inspired. Yes, I'm afraid that most of my posts here is me dumping my trashy rough scribblings on you. Hardly any of them are really edited properly. What would Pn. Poga say? sigh...

Well, here it is. Hopefully it's improve-able and not sh**y as previously commented by someone

(and hey i'm REALLY not mad at that someone, just perplexed that she never explained her comment. it's a shame, I'd have loved to know her reasoning.)

Two kids

The King is dead; long live the king!

We’re here to be royalty in fantasy

Two kids in a fairyland

Here to grow up and conquer.


There are ogres and giants

Bitter beasts, evil witches and demons.

Saddle your noble steed and grab your sword

We’ve a world to defend


Your crown is too big for you

But put it on, march ahead of your troops

I’m right here with you

Let us protect and govern and rule.


Laugh at fear and win with a song

Fantasy won’t bring us down

We learn best when we are in

our fairy world.


Two kids in this fairyland,

Here to grow up and conquer.

We’ll soon know how to live and overcome

the Real World.

3 comments:

  1. you have TAYLOR SWIFT'S NEW ALBUM?!!!

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  2. wow ru yen???.......seriously!!..no comment on the poem which is the main post huh?!!...hehehehe

    the poem is wonderful miss montannah!!..but i am guessing u are leaving the meaning of it to be more metaphorical than literal arent u?? hehehehehehe

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  3. Hannah, It's a joy to meet you young people! Keep shining for Jesus

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